Update 00-declaration-of-individual-sovereignty.md

00-declaration-of-individual-sovereignty.md

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 Existence exists and the act of grasping this implies two corollary axioms: that something exists which one perceives and that one exists possessing consciousness.
 These two -- existence and consciousness -- are axioms humankind cannot escape; these two are the irreducible primaries implied in any action one undertakes, in any
-part of one's knowledge. Whatever one knows, the axioms remain the same: that it exists and that you know it: that Existence is Identity and Consciousness is Identification.
+part of one's knowledge. Whatever one knows, the axioms remain the same: that it exists and that you know it: that **Existence is Identity and Consciousness is Identification**.
 
 We hold these axioms to be self-evident and self-reaffirming: that man is a rational creature possessing a rational consciousness which is his only tool of
-survival and that to hamper a rational creature's mind is to hamper its ability to live and thrive - thus man's right to life is his right to the unhampered use
+survival and that to hamper a rational creature's mind is to hamper its ability to live and thrive - thus a man's right to life is his right to the unhampered use
 of his rational faculty in the pursuit of his life and thriving. That to secure this right to life means to secure it against the predations of other rational
-creatures who wish to survive as rulers who extort others rather than as rational men who think and produce. That governments are instituted among men to enforce
-this necessary security against predatory men. That whenever any Form of Government becomes destructive of these ends, it is implied within the right of
-rational creatures to their own lives, to alter or to abolish such government, and to institute new Government, laying its foundation on such principles and
-organizing its powers in such form, as to them shall seem most likely to enforce this right to life as rational creatures to the end that they may pursue their
-happiness.
+creatures who wish to survive as brutes who extort others rather than as rational men who think and produce. That governments are instituted among men to enforce
+this necessary security against predatory men. That whenever any Form of Government becomes destructive of these ends, it is implied by the right of
+rational creatures to their own lives, that they may alter or abolish such government, and to institute new Government, laying its foundation on such principles and
+organizing its powers in such form, as to them shall seem most likely to enforce this right to rational life to the end that they may pursue their happiness.
 
-We lay these charges against {hostile government/political status quo/ruling entity}, that it has set itself up to be an enemy of the right of rational creatures to pursue their lives by reason, subjecting
+We lay these charges against {_hostile government/political status quo/ruling entity_}, that it has set itself up to be an enemy of the right of rational creatures to pursue their lives by reason, subjecting
 said rational creatures to a life lower than the rational -- to a life less than human. To prove this, let Facts be submitted to a candid world:
 
-{Show cause by enumeration of facts}
+{_Show cause by enumeration of facts_}
 
 In every stage of these Oppressions We have Petitioned for Redress in the most humble terms: Our repeated Petitions have been answered only by repeated injury.
 A Prince whose character is thus marked by every act which may define a Tyrant, is unfit to be the ruler of a free people.
 
-We, therefore, the Representatives of the sovereign right of rational creatures to life qua rational being, embodied in the form of {name your political entity}
-in General Congress, Assembled, appealing to the final jurisdiction of reason for the rectitude of our intentions, do, in the Name, and by Authority of our right to life,
-solemnly publish and declare, That {name your political entity} is, and by right ought to be, Free and Independent; that they it is Absolved from all Allegiance
-to {hostile entity}, and that all political connection between them and the {hostile entity}, is and ought to be totally dissolved; and that being Free and
-Independent, they have full Power to levy War, conclude Peace, contract Alliances, establish Commerce, and to do all other Acts and Things which Independent
+We, therefore, the Representatives of the sovereign right of rational creatures to life qua rational being, embodied in the form of {_name your political entity_}
+in General Congress, Assembled, appealing to the final jurisdiction of reason for the rectitude of our intentions, do, in the Name, and by Authority of our right to life, solemnly publish and declare, That {_name your political entity_} is, and by right ought to be, Free and Independent; that they it is Absolved from all
+Allegiance to {_hostile entity_}, and that all political connection between them and the {hostile entity}, is and ought to be totally dissolved; and that being Free 
+and Independent, they have full Power to levy War, conclude Peace, contract Alliances, establish Commerce, and to do all other Acts and Things which Independent
 States may of right do. And for the support of this Declaration, with a firm reliance on the final jurisdiction of reason, we mutually stand together in this cause,
 staking our Lives, our Fortunes and our sacred Honor.