diff --git a/10-miscellaneous/10-explicit-sandboxing-of-protected-classes-apologia.md b/10-miscellaneous/10-explicit-sandboxing-of-protected-classes-apologia.md index 3955f6a..81c0e6a 100644 --- a/10-miscellaneous/10-explicit-sandboxing-of-protected-classes-apologia.md +++ b/10-miscellaneous/10-explicit-sandboxing-of-protected-classes-apologia.md @@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ inhabiting sandboxes have the required curriculum and expected graduation date c desirable outcomes since individuals can better prepare themselves to graduate these sandboxes rather than to fail to graduate, yet still be held liable for failure by the culture at large if they fail to realize that there were milestones that they were expected to achieve. -We have seen that in past cutures founded on elements of "capitalism", the failure by large numbers of youth to graduate from these sandboxes produces +We have seen that in past cutures founded on vague elements of "capitalism", the failure by large numbers of youth to graduate from these sandboxes produces dissatisfaction, especially because they tend to complain that they didn't even know that they were being assessed in the first place. This is essentially the complaint that people are making when they say things such as: